"How are you feeling today Dr. Walters?" she asked him.
"Laura Dell, I have something I need to talk to you about," he said, looking straight into her eyes. "First, call me Herbert. Second, I may not be young, but I'm not fossilized yet, so until that time comes, you don't have to tip-toe around me." Dr. Walters grinned the way he often did when he found a way to compare himself to things in the museum, making Laura Dell laugh.
"I'm doing alright. Actually, I feel like a little walk. How about we do see Sue?"
"Of course, Herbert. Let me go check in with Dr. Feinman first to make sure there is nothing he needs me to do."
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"How is Dr. Feinman today?" Dr. Walters asked Laura Dell when she returned.
"He's actually in a good mood this morning. Monday's are pretty slow so there is less for him to stress out about. We have a group of elementary school students comeing for a field trip in a little while, but I organized everything for that yesterday. I've got some free time now. Are you ready to go?" she asked.
"Yes I am. I think we should go straight to Sue. I have to leave in a little while for an appointment." Dr. Walters stood up using his cane and held his arm out to Laura Dell. She slipped her hand through his arm and started walking towards Sue.
"What kind of appointment do you have today?" she asked.
"Laura Dell, do you remember that night I walked you home form the bar?" he asked as they walked up to Sue. The room was almost entirely deserted except for a mom with two preschool aged children. Laura Dell nodded as she watched the children. They had not talked about that night after she apologized and she was not sure she wanted to talk about it now. She was sure that she wanted to know where Dr. Walters had been going on the days he didn't stop by the museum.
"Well that night I tried to tell you something. I tried to tell you the reason I've been going to all these doctor's appointments, the reason I'm going to one today." Though Dr. Walters' tone was the same now as it was that night a few weeks ago, something about his voice was different. he seemed more serious now. Laura Dell let go of his arm to wipe dust off the nameplate in front of Sue.
"I'm not as healthy as I once was. Part of getting old means you have to go to the doctor more often. You don't need to be worrying about me though."
Laura Dell looked into Dr. Walters' eyes and wondered what he wasn't telling her. He didn't give her the details she was hoping for, but she decided not to pry right now. After a second he smiled at her; the discussion was over. The mom with the little kids moved closer to where they were standing.
"Are you excited about having your first school group this afternoon?" Dr. Walters asked as he started walking around Sue away from the kids. Laura Dell looped her arm back through his.
"Yes I am. I'm also a little nervous though. As a child, I thought science was fascinating, but I'm afraid these kids won't be like me."
"I have done some presentations at elementary schools and I was surprised at how much the kids really enjoyed it. You just have to make it interesting. When you show the kids Sue, don't just tell them how old she is and where she was found, tell a story about her. I'm sure they will love whatever you come up with."
Laura Dell and Dr. Walters made up stories for each other about Sue until she was no longer nervous. When it was time for Dr. Walters to leave for his appointment, he and Laura Dell agreed to meet for dinner later so she could tell him all about the kids.
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When the children arrived, it took Laura Dell more time than she expected to get them to calm down and listen to her. After they got settled in, the tour of the museum went as well as she could have hoped for. Laura Dell completed the tour with a story about Sue, the leader of a dinosaur tribe. The story was a combination of the many stories she and Dr. Walters had created together.
Because they finished a little earlier than planned, she had time to talk to the kids that were most interested while the rest of the group wandered around Sue's room. In the midst of telling a little girl about the fossils they saw in the Cenozoic Time Machine exhibit, Laura Dell saw a few little boys swinging on the ropes surrounding Sue. Before she could get over to them, one of them went under the ropes and ran up to Sue to touch her leg. Laura Dell ran after him and got him out, but not before Dr. Feinman saw what was going on. She returned the little boy over to his teacher for punishment and went to talk to Dr. Feinman.
"I'm so sorry sir. That will never happen-"
"Miss Dell, you can't promise me that will never happen again. Children are unpredictable. Their teachers should have been more responsible for watching them. You would be surprised at how often that happens during tours. The last time it happened during one of my tours, I decided to put up a more permanent barrier, but we haven't gotten around to it yet," Dr. Feinman told Laura Dell. "I was just coming over here to tell you that you have a visitor in the lobby."
***
After the children all said "thank you" to Laura Dell, she headed to the lobby, expecting to see Dr. Walters arriving early for their dinner.
"Surprise!" a familiar voice yelled to her. Instead of Dr. Walters, Laura Dell found John William waiting for her. She ran over to him and hugged him.
"What are you doing here?" Laura dell asked her brother. When she decided to move to Chicago, Laura Dell was saddest to leave her brother. They had discussed him coming to visit, but they did not decide on any particulars.
"I just thought it was time to check on my baby sister and make sure she was being treated well." John William was always the free spirit of the family. Laura Dell and their parents needed a plan for everything, but John William thought plans were boring.
"I have to stay here until closing time, but I can show you around the museum until time to go. I promised a friend that I would eat dinner with him tonight and I would love for you to meet him."
"That sounds great, as long as you promise to tell me about how your life is going and don't talk too much about the museum. I would rather hear about your friends." John William and Laura Dell did not share a passion for science and he often accused her of being boring when she tried to tell him about her work.
They walked through the Cenozoic Time Machine exhibit and Laura Dell told her brother a little about Dr. Walters, Eddie, Dr. Feinman and he even thought Sue was interesting for a few minutes.
"Dr. Feinman could be nicer to you, but I'm glad you have some friends here. I can't wait to meet Dr. Walters. I hope he's not a boring science guy though."
***
When Laura Dell finished at work, she took John William by her apartment to get ready for dinner and then went to meet Dr. Walters. She didn't have time to tell her brother much other than he was an ornithologist and that they had become friends at the museum.
They walked into the restaurant and saw Dr. Walters already at a table. When Laura Dell got over to him they hugged and she introduced him to John William.
"He decided to surprise me with a visit so I thought this would be a good time for y'all to meet," she explained as they sat down at the table.
"It's nice to meet you Dr. Walters. My sister mentioned that you are a frequent visitor of the museum and tat you went to school in the South. Where exactly are you from?" John William asked.
"You will have to excuse John William, Herbert. He doesn't care much for science. He would rather talk about anything but science." Laura Dell smiled at Dr. Walters and said, "Maybe you can help me convince him that it really is interesting."
"Science isn't for everyone I guess. That's why those of us that love it have to stick together," he said.
Dr. Walters talked to John William about his time at school in Texas and the traveling he did when he was going on digs, but stayed away from science. By the time the main course came, Laura Dell thought Dr. Walters and John William were getting along much better than she expected.
Hello all-
ReplyDeleteI hope you enjoy my chapter. I tried to make the relationship between LD and Dr. W as subtle as possible.
JW is back by popular demand...YAY! I hope that he can help reveal some of the relationship/tension between LD and Dr. W. I look forward to seeing what Dottie does with JW's reaction to their relationship.
I also decided to make Dr. Feinman a little bit nice in this situation, but I think she still doesn't like him very much.
I would like to apologize for the lack of double-spacing. I had some technical difficulties with my post. When I typed the chapter in, it was double-spaced, but when it posted, most of it wasn't. I even attempted to edit and repost to fix it, but alas, I failed. Also I could not find a way to copy and paste my chapter from Microsoft Word 07 so if anyone else has had this problem and knows how to fix it, let me know.
Thanks!
Great chapter!
ReplyDeleteI was about to get really mad at Feinman - how can you jump on LD for something when the teachers should have been watching?! I mean really - but then JW showed up and Feinman was reasonable! I was shocked and quite pleased.
I also like how JW came to see her - although Chicago is a long way from Siloam, I think it's cool that he came. I can't wait to see what happens with JW and Dr. W.
I’m glad you let Dr. Walter’s make another entrance. I can really see the possibility of a deeper relationship between them in this scene. All that “arm looping” and the brainstorming about Sue together is very personal, so good job going that direction.
ReplyDeleteI also thought it was a nice addition that you let Mr. Feinman be a little more understanding. This seems to suggest that their initial conflict has subsided, and we can now get ready for the big conflict, the old-man relationship. Nice job!
Lovely job, Emily. I think that your subtlty with the arm looping - and how many different meanings it could have - was a great touch.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to the rest of dinner with Dr. Walters and LD.
My only concern here is the line about her brother not liking science felt heavy throughout or just slightly repetitive. I don't know if we plan to continue mentioning that through the nest chapter, but maybe for the next chapter - show how he doesn't like science (like making up a completely random project instead of a science project at school) or leave it out for the next chapter?
Just a suggestion. :)
Emily! Wonderful, wonderful work!
ReplyDeleteI thoroughly enjoyed the twist with Dr.F - it was unexpected and gave a new depth to his character beyond the mustache twisting villain he was starting to become.
Great job of laying the ground work for the emotional attachment between LD and Dr. Walters. It should be interesting to see how that's handled in the future.
Anyway, thanks for your hard work!!!
Cheers,
- Megan F.
I am def enjoying the developing relationship between LD and her two male friends. I cannot wait to see where this goes and with whom. It is good we are learning more about Dr. Walters as well.
ReplyDeleteDr. Walters arm looping with a much younger woman... I like where this is going.
ReplyDeleteAlso Feinman appears to have gotten a grip on whatever had him so pissed off and I have to say I am surprised and also very pleased.
Just a suggestion, I feel like I see a possible clash between JW and DrW coming later on, just a thought.
Great Chapter Emily
Great chapter!
ReplyDeleteI must echo everyone else and say thank you for making Mr. F a real person! I honestly was about to be really upset with him, but you added great depth to his character in that moment and took us away from falling into a flat character.
I also like the friendship that's developing between Dr. W and LD. You handled it very well... and I agree that the JW/Dr. W should be interesting.
Thank you, Emily!
Great chapter Emily!!
ReplyDeleteI think there is a lot to work with here with JW and his possible insights into LD's relationship with Dr. Walters.
I also think you handled the awkwardnesses really well. The arm looping and the subtle affection was really well done. I think that is the way to handle the route we have chosen to take with LD and Dr. W's relationship. There is no creepyness here. I think we can keep this up and do some good stuff.
I'm looking foward to the new interactions with JW!!
Em,
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a really good job developing the relationship between LD and Dr. Walters. There was a deeper connection there that was well done, the arm looping was tender and sweet without hitting you in the face with the idea of a romantic relationship between the two.
You did great with Feinman, he was a pretty one-dimensional character before this chapter, and you added some depth to him.
You also set the stage for JW to be a protective older brother, which i thought was great. You did great with him! I was happy to finally see him appear!
Great job!
You did a good job avoiding the awkwardness with LD and Herb. It is good that Feiman had a lapse in his usual attitude and showing that he is a human. I look forward to JW interacting with more characters.
ReplyDeleteThe presentation Laura does for the kids is good. It gives us some feeling of Laura’s daily life.
ReplyDeleteThe contrast between John William and Walters is something that will be easy to develop. Good addition.
I'm glad we get more of a feel here for what laura dell is supposed to do for her job and i would have liked to hear more about the little kids! yay for john william! i'm excited to know more about him.
ReplyDeleteI love the dinner scene JW is so realistic in his role as big brother. It is also nice to get a feel for LD's history through her relationship with JW.
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